nice Adam i like how you had a loud and clear voice and you added a quote from the book. i think you should tell more about the characters
Adam, I was pretty convinced, and I also really agree that you should help others. Something that I wish for is, to tell maybe a little more about the characters, and how they interacted with each other.
I like how you read with expression, And i like your 3 reasons.
i like how you stated your claim clearly
I like how you had lots of quotes in your examples and reasons and I am very convinced that I had nothing to write that you should work on.so maybe next time don't do a well so I can leave a better comment(Joking)
nice Adam i like how you had a loud and clear voice and you added a quote from the book. i think you should tell more about the characters
ReplyDeleteAdam, I was pretty convinced, and I also really agree that you should help others. Something that I wish for is, to tell maybe a little more about the characters, and how they interacted with each other.
ReplyDeleteI like how you read with expression, And i like your 3 reasons.
ReplyDeletei like how you stated your claim clearly
ReplyDeleteI like how you had lots of quotes in your examples and reasons and I am very convinced that I had nothing to write that you should work on.
ReplyDeleteso maybe next time don't do a well so I can leave a better comment
(Joking)